Goodman Games

Page 254, Introduction, paragraph 3: "Artifact" is spoken of as singular, then written as plural: Younglings are expected to survive on their own for a full week, and to return to the tribe bearing at least one working artifact s of the ancients. Rather than: Younglings are expected to sur...

My users got a expository segue between zero-level funnel and the level one adventure that followed. Something like "After their harrowing experience beyond the Portal Under the Stars, those who survived staggered out into the world and pursued new trades of interest: martial, magical, spiritua...

The backstory (yeesh! I hate that word) is for the adventure itself. The past events that led to the current situation. I want the PCs to at least have the opportunity to know these things going in, because they might learn more about what's actually happening that way. Ahh. Maybe I'm just overcomp...

I also particularly liked The Old God's Return. I'm running my players through a few other things in the interim, but we started with Portal and I plan a call back to the final hook (other half of the rulership rod) using Old God's Return, which features a blessing of "sovereign fire" tha...